Blurry around the edges
I watch them carve the vast
knife-edged darkness
and empty bones
all the seeming freedom
yet
feathered satellites
to hollow of home
and need
Blurry around the edges
I watch them carve the vast
knife-edged darkness
and empty bones
all the seeming freedom
yet
feathered satellites
to hollow of home
and need
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Yup. This one is my favorite.
That’s lovely.
Thank you.
Of all the things you have ever written … I think this one is my favorite. I think I’d like it on a coffee mug, or a canvas bag that I can carry other words around in.
Yes. I think I would.
Shared this (and your Amazon Author link) on my Facebook page with similar words; I tagged your facebook page, so you may see it.
I like the notion of a canvas bag in which you carry words, words I imagine to be a jumbled yarn-tangle of meanings and promises of things that might have been said.
Yes, I like the thought of that bag.
Thank you, Amy.
I’m playing mad catch up tonight. For reasons I haven’t inspected, I’ve been playing hooky from the internets.
Then I missed you.
And I smile at the truths in this offering of yours.
A secret?
I don’t mean the birds to be children. I think people are reading it that way, but no … that’s not what I intended.
Shhh. It works either way.